Tamashii & Friends - Gathering Original Colorized

Tamashii & Friends - Gathering Original Colorized

Thursday, March 15, 2012

"It is finished"...

Ever had that uplifting feeling when you feel proud of what you've accomplished? I have and for the very first time too. And I celebrated it with a victory lap around Cass County.

Yesterday was the official date both the original and English versions of Angelic Guardians: The Gathering were filed under "COMPLETE" on my flash drive. That's right. They're finished.

And I have to say that I was very pleased with how the plot turned out in the end. I knew before I thought about submitting The Gathering to an agent or publishing company, I had some rough spots to smooth out. Delete a few scenes, make the words flow, and touch up on some areas, and BOOM! I could not have asked for a better storyline.

Well, I could have, but that'll come later.

It felt good saving the final chapter of the English adaption one last time and putting the laptop away with a completed piece of work I began in my college years, knowing that I'm now ready to ask for an agent's helping hand toward publishing. It was like having a great weight being taken off my shoulders. Sure, I will admit that it does feel weird not sitting down in between jobs and spend my afternoons thinking about how can I make this book better, but I believe it's time to move forward and focus on the future.

Will The Gathering need more polishing? I'm sure, but definitely not as much as before. Thankfully, my parents are willing to support me financially and help me pay any editor that wants to take on this project. Aside from that, I'm ready to hand it over to someone who can get it on the shelves.

Thank you to everyone who followed me over the years. Next week starts another big project: writing a good query letter as part of my search for an agent. Keep me in your thoughts and prayers.

And as a reward for your faithfulness, the series' illustrator Erin Gentry sent me a pic of the lineart version for one of the covers. Enjoy!



Kinda reminds you of Sailor Moon, doesn't it? Mission accomplished.

Wednesday, December 28, 2011

Two Versions? No Way!

Earlier in my postings of The Gathering on Fiction Press, I received a critique from an annonymous reviewer which left me disgruntled as first but it gave me an idea.

Considering the Angelic Guardians and Angelic Guardians Beginnings series take place in Japan, it made sense for the characters to have Japanese names or Western names that have been translated to Japanese, but not every reader agreed to my thinking. They didn't like seeing key religious terms in romanji, and it confused those who were Christian or a particular Western religion. I even had one reader say that she would not buy my books because it looked like I was creating a new religion based on Christianity.

Seriously, why would I do that?

But I got to thinking... if popular anime and manga titles like Sailor Moon were dubbed and translated into English using Western names, why can't Angelic Guardians do the same?

So, in addition to the original Japanese story, each release will also have an English/Western adaption. Here's an example of what to expect:

  • Rizu Hikarino --> Liz Light
  • Beronika Hoshino --> Veronica Starr
  • Megu Hino --> Meg Blaze
  • Jeison Ankokuno --> Jason Dark
  • Deibiddo Fushimawashino --> David Bard
  • Robu Tsuchino --> Rob Stone
  • Raian Daishizenno --> Ryan Forrest
  • Ami Umino --> Amy Waterson
  • Shinmei --> God
  • Iesu --> Jesus
  • Gaburieru --> Gabriel
  • Myoujou --> Lucifer
  • Kasushiusu --> Cassius
  • Deiraira --> Delilah
  • Kureopatora --> Cleopatora
  • Medosa --> Medusa
  • Buruutasu --> Brutus
  • Judasu --> Judas
  • Kirisutokyou --> Christianity
  • Kurisuchan --> Christian
  • Mushiron --> Atheism
  • Mushinsha --> Atheist
However, names like Tamashii, Medetai, and so forth will not change due to the fact that the twelve Angelic Guardians are directly named after certain aspects such as soul, joy, love, death, life, etc. It'd be weird to go from Tamashii in Japan to Soul in America or England. Yeah. I'll stick with something more mystic.

So, to those who are complaining about their eyes hurting as they read my series, your wish has been granted.

And you know what that means, right? New artwork! My illustrator is spending time working hard on the original version, but she's looking forward to do an alternate verison for the English/Western release.

Needless to say, I'm looking forward to see it!

Friday, December 16, 2011

"All we are sayin' is give peace a chance..."

Well, since my last blog, shit hit the ceiling fan. Hard. To begin with, my laptop had a meltdown a few hours later and the harddrive crashed. But have no fear -- I managed to save the original files on my Mac, and the updated files online. However, any work and fan fiction that was on my Toshiba are gone. Forever. Ah well. Thank God for backups. Unfortunately, my Mac is out of date, so I'm limited in terms of online time.

I'm also more than halfway done touching up on The Gathering, but I wish I was further at this point. But I'm still doing good time-wise. I hope to get in contact with an agent by early 2012. Go me.

On a sadder note, I posted (and promoted) a new business that was coming to downtown Logansport. Unfortunately, Some Kind of Wonderful Books & Gifts has been abandoned. The article from the November 27, 2011 issue of the Pharos-Tribune said that the owner (Kitty Keswick) went back to California to be with her family, whereas a reliable source told me through the realtor that she had second thoughts. Regardless, this is a major blow to me.

I know that Christmas is coming around the corner for many of you, regardless if you see it as a day of Santa's gifts or God's Gift (Jesus, that is), but I do pay my respects to those that don't observe Christmas due to religious reasons. Happy (or Merry) Christmas to my Christian peeps, Happy Chanukah to my Jewish peps, Happy Kwanzaa to my black peeps, and to those who don't have a particular day of celebration at this time, Happy Holidays to you.

One last thing, usually I post a holiday special with the gang from Angelic Guardians, but since I lost the revised version of "Finding the Christmas Spirit" and I don't feel like stopping in the middle of my progress with The Gathering just to redo it, I'm gonna do something special next year. And you can thank Mr. Grinch for giving me the idea. I'll give you a clue as to why I'm thinking How the Grinch Stole Christmas: read the story of the Magi in Matthew 2 and see where Myoujou/Lucifer would twist it around.

Goodbye, 2011. Hello, 2012!

Friday, November 25, 2011

"Give thanks with a grateful heart..."

Yesterday in the US was a day of thanks. Many of us spent the afternoon with our loved ones around a giant cooked turkey at the table, while others (like myself) prepared for Christmas and watched a little bit of football (which, by the way, GO COWBOYS!). Don't worry... tomorrow, I'll get my turkey fix for the year. I even made an agreement with my future brother-in-law over the drumsticks. XD

Now, I don't have a lot to be thankful for... okay, so maybe I do: having parents who allowed me to come back home after college without charging rent, two jobs to keep the income flow going, friends who have my back no matter how far away they are, and, believe it or not, people who are interested with my progress concerning Angelic Guardians. To those who continue to follow me on Facebook, FanFiction.net, and FictionPress.com, THANK YOU!!! Your support has boosted me in dark times, and you have no idea how much it has helped. I'm hoping by next year around this time, you'll have included Angelic Guardians: The Gathering on your holiday wishlist. As for me, I'm hoping to be touching up on The Awakening and get it ready for publishing. I can't afford to leave all you fans hanging, can I?

Again, words cannot describe how much I am thankful to have fans like you. 2012 isn't gonna be the end of the world. Well, it might be the end of the world as we know it once I'm done, but it's gonna be our year for sure! Thank you and be careful on this Black Friday!

Thursday, October 6, 2011

An Original "Angelic Guardians" Creepypasta!

A few days ago on YouTube, I came across a Pokémon hacked game called Pokémon Creepy Black (Cursed Black to all you aspiring game designers). To date, the concept is the best my 25-year-old self has ever seen: you have not one but TWO starting Pokémon (Bulbasaur/Charmander/Squirtle and an unknown Pokémon named Ghost in the form of one of the Pokémon Tower ghosts prior to receiving the Silph Scope), and, depending if you choose to use Ghost, you curse (actually, you kill) both Pokémon and trainers, including your rival during your last match (you know they're gone when you see a tombstone in their place after the battle). After defeating the Elite Four and your rival to become the Pokémon Champion, time passes by, there is no one left in the overworld (Mom's not even at the house when you finally arrive in Pallet Town, which implies she's passed on at this point), and it's your turn to join the others. You, as an old man, face Ghost without any Pokémon, items, or the option to run away. You use Struggle, but Ghost isn't affected by the attack and you're struck with recoil until you're down to 1 HP. Then... Ghost curses you. In the end, you die, and the screen goes black, much like the reality of our lifespan on earth. That final battle against Ghost is nothing more than your encounter with the Angel of Death or the Grim Reaper (whichever you prefer) who has come to take you away to your grave.



What I didn't know about the game was that while it was a hack, it was also a creepypasta. Okay... what IS a creepypasta? Creepypasta is an internet term used to create negative and uneasy feelings to readers in a similar reaction when you read Goosebumps. So, being the twisted person I tend to be, I found more Pokémon hacks based on these creepypastas (I totally recommend Lost Silver for those who are big fans of Unown and show major hatred toward Gold), and soon I became addicted. And if you want to see more of these creepypastas, go to the 6th Floor. There are lot of myths and stories that gave me and some of my friends chills.

Now, that being said, there is one Pokémon creepypasta that inspired me to write my own using my series. It's called "Hypno's Lullaby", which goes along the line of Hypno's Fire Red Pokédex entry: "It carries a pendulum-like device. There was once an incident in which it took away a child it hypnotized." Incidentally, there have been several videos made to bring this creepypasta to life to the tune of the Lavender Town Theme song. It's bad enough the Lavender Town Theme has unbelievable but freaky creepypastas written about the music and how it led to the mass suicides of children in Japan, but to combine it with "Hypno's Lullaby" only adds onto the implied pedophilia.

My creepypasta? I like to call this one "Paipa's Lullaby" (or "Piper's Lullaby" in the English/Western adaption). And who is Paipa? Paipa is a piper-demon who works for Deiraira (or Delilah to all you Yankees) in the first part of Angelic Guardians: The Awakening. His main mission is to search for Seijitsu's chosen vessel, but when he is first introduced, his M.O. was to kidnap the visiting children of Roganu Beach to lure the Angelic Guardians in that area out of hiding. Of course, this mission fails, but because Deiraira has favored him out of all her demons, she hands him the task to search and destroy (better yet, manipulate) Seijitsu.

Essentially, Paipa is very much like Hypno in their respective creepypastas: they take on the role of the fictional children's book character the Pied Piper and lead the children away from home through a certain form of brainwashing (Paipa --> his wooden flute; Hypno --> his pendulum) to their doom. And, so without further ado, here is my first attempt at writing a creepypasta. I hope you like it, and I totally recommend you listen to the Lavender Town Theme song while reading and reciting this poem. (And if you need help doing that, listen to "Hypno's Lullaby".)


Paipa's Lullaby


Here, little children, don’t be afraid

Paipa’s here with a tune to play

Away from bed where your head once laid

Mama and Papa won’t know you’re away



Dear little children, why so scared?

Paipa won’t touch a single hair

He loved you all when nobody cared

He won’t let you see just how life’s unfair



Dear little children, follow me

And hear my joyful melody

On my flute of wood I’ll play, you see

I bring happiness to everybody



Dear little children, won’t you come

To a great world with loads of fun

Free rides for all and candy for some

Always in the night and no need for sun



Dear little children, foolish you were

Left your beds for a tune you heard

An ageless fate you will now suffer

And slumber in my curse without a word


DISCLAIMER: All (original) characters and plots belong to L. D. Smith ©2011.

Tuesday, August 9, 2011

Angelic Guardians Music Library: Muse

Last week, I went down to Noblesville, IN, to see one of the greatest British bands of the 21st century: Muse. Yes, this is the same band that ended up being associated with the Twilight series all because Stephenie Meyer listened to them while writing her series. Frankly, I don't believe Muse should have been linked to sparkly vampires. If you listen to their last two albums (Black Holes and Revelations and The Resistance, respectively), you will agree that they fit better with Angelic Guardians than Twilight by a long shot.

Here's the reason: Muse's music has been tied to the government in an unconvential way... to the point that some people believe lead singer/guitarist Matthew Bellamy's political beliefs could hold some truth in light of the end of times. Songs like "Apocalypse Now", "Ruled by Secrecy", "United States of Eurasia", and, lest we forget their signature song, "Uprising" speak of what we know as the New World Order/Illuminati. And if you have read the book of Revelation and the Left Behind series, you know exactly where I'm going with this: only a one-world government, ruled by the alleged anti-Christ, could fulfill John's visions in Revelation where the Beast of the Earth is concerned.


Muse lead singer Matthew Bellamy doing his trademark "Eye of the Illuminati" gesture
during "Uprising" at the 2011 Grammy Awards,
which made its way onto national television.



I was later inspired to create this photomanipulation.
The right picture ought to be a graphic tee-shirt or hoodie.


It's no wonder Oasis and Beady Eyes' lead singer Liam Gallagher stated last month in a press release that he was "fucking scared of Muse". I can't say that I blame him. Take the lyrics to the song "Take a Bow", for instance. The song has inspired me to the point that if Angelic Guardians: The Revelations, pt. 2 ever becomes a live-action movie adaption, I will use Ian Cologne's symphonic version as the background music to Lucifer's coronation prior to the neo-Holocaust.

"Corrupt, you corrupt and bring corruption to all that you touch.
Hold, you'll behold and be holden for all that you've done.
And spell, cast a spell, cast a spell on the country you run,
And risk, you will risk, you will risk all their lives and their souls.
And burn, you will burn,
You will burn in Hell, yeah, you'll burn in Hell,
You'll burn in Hell, yeah, you'll burn in Hell for your sins...

Death, you bring death and destruction to all that you touch.
Pay, you must pay, you must pay for the crimes against the earth.
Hex, feed the hex, feed the hex on the country you love,
And beg, you will beg, you will beg for their lives and their souls.
And burn, you will burn,
You will burn in Hell, yeah, you'll burn in Hell,
You'll burn in Hell, yeah, you'll burn in Hell,
You'll burn in Hell, yeah, you'll burn in Hell for you sins."

(Did I not tell you how scary some of their music really is?)

I don't know what Meyer was smoking when she wrote Twilight, but Muse should have never been spotlighted as THE band for her series. Thankfully, I was intrigued by them when I saw their performance at the 2009 MTV Video Music Awards where they performed "Uprising" for the first time on American TV. It might have been the killer teddy bears that did the trick, but the song's lyrics (after I Googled them up) spoke to me. That was when I knew Muse was the band, along with Nine Inch Nails and, later on, Radiohead, to include in the Angelic Guardians soundtracks.

Now that I got the Twilight-bashing off my chest, I can continue with my review. Anyway, the trip to Noblesville was my second Muse experience. Honestly, if you haven't seen them live before, DO IT! They will wind up somewhere on your Top 5 Best Concerts list. They've never disappointed their fans before, and they're bound to wow you after that first concert. Believe me, one of my friends tagged along, and after the concert, she asked me if we could stop by her house in Indy real quick so she can copy my albums onto her computer.

I was lucky to record some songs on my new digital camera, but the camera died right at the end of  "Knights of Cydonia", and I accidentally deleted "Uprising" the next morning when I was reviewing my pics! (And that was THE best video ever!) But I did get away with "Hysteria", "Starlight", and, my favorite part of their tours, "Plug in Baby". The videos are on YouTube and on my Facebook account, but I'll post them here for your pleasure. Forgive me for the sound, especially at the beginning of PiB.

Muse Performing "Hysteria":



Muse Performing "Starlight":



Muse Performing "Plug in Baby":



Picture Time! (and photomanipulated too!)












Now if you all will excuse me, it's time for me to put on some "Knights of Cydonia"...


(... transmission has been lost...)

Wednesday, July 27, 2011

Featured Japanese Goodies: Mochi Ice Cream


My first attempt at making mochi ice cream.

As promised in an earlier post, I finally got around and made some mochi ice cream for the first time. Needless to say, it was somewhere between an epic fail and an epic win. The overall appearance and form didn't look as good as what Naked Tchopstix serves, but it tasted just the same... with the exception of a few over-doughy balls. Don't worry, I intend on mastering this art before too long.

It's hard to say when mochi ice cream will creep up into the Angelic Guardians saga. From what I've read, the Japanese Americans created it and brought it over to Japan in the twentieth century, which makes it a candidate for the Demonic Guardians trilogy. The common flavors include vanilla, mango, strawberry, and green tea. However, more and more Japanese are getting accustomed to eating chocolate on a financial scale (chocolate used to be considered as a luxury), so chocolate has been added onto the list.

So, if you are like me and wish to take on this skill, here's a recipe that I got from two websites (one of which came from blogger.com itself). Good luck!



Mochi Ice Cream
(Japanese Ice Cream)







Ingredients:

1/3 c. sweet rice flour (glutinous rice flour)

½ c. water

½ c. sugar

Cornstarch

Your preferred ice cream flavor (Common Japanese flavors include vanilla, green tea, strawberry, mango, and, recently, chocolate. However, you can always throw in some mint chocolate chip, butter pecan, cookies & cream, etc. for fun.)



Directions:

1.   Dump sweet rice flour into a glass bowl.

2.   Add water a little bit at a time as you mix it with the rice flour.

3.   Cover the glass bowl with plastic wrap but leave a portion of the bowl open to allow air flow. Otherwise, you might be at risk of blowing up your glass bowl (see step four).

4.   Put the glass bowl in the microwave for 3 minutes on medium. Your dough will start to thicken from the heat.

5.   Dip a wooden spoon in water and stir the dough.

6.   Put the glass bowl back in the microwave for another minute on medium. Your dough should then start to look smooth and shiny.

7.   Dump the dough onto a cutting board and smooth it out with a wet wooden spoon. Make sure the cutting board is covered with cornstarch. You will need cornstarch to cover the dough too.

8.   Flip the dough over and make sure it is coated well with cornstarch.

9.   Push and stretch the dough until it is smooth, flat, about 3 millimeters thick.

10.   If the dough is still warm at this point, let it cool!

11.   Use either a small bowl/cup or a larger bowl/cup to cut out your dough wraps.

a.   Recommendation: It’s best to freeze your dough wraps before you begin filling it with ice cream. Depending how warm the wraps are, your ice cream may start melting.

                                                               i.  To freeze: place a flat wrap on a sheet of plastic wrap (again, covered with cornstarch), and place another flat wrap on top of it in the same way (plastic wrap à flat dough wrap à plastic wrap à flat dough wrap, etc.). Do this until are flat wraps are gone. Top it off with one last piece of plastic wrap.

12.  Drop a medium-sized (or smaller) scoop of ice cream in the center of your flat dough wrap.

13.  Tuck in all the edges at the top of the ice cream scoop and pinch them to hold the wrap in place.

a.   Recommendation: If the dough isn’t sticking together as you wrap your ice cream, there’s nothing wrong with sprinkling some water. Cornstarch tends to dry out the dough, so it might be craving for moisture.

14.  Before you continue to make another, it’s highly recommended that you start freezing your dough ball as soon as you’re done with it!

15.  Freeze until you’re ready to serve.

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